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College Memoirs by loudwisdom, literature

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6ft Flaming Snowcone by loudwisdom, literature

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6ft Flaming Snowcone

I mold your three piece physique with icy focus. Two twigs, one carrot, and three pieces of charcoal later I return your smile. Standing erect you rest my old weathered shovel against your abdomen. Dragging the fire-engine red plastic container proves difficult your 2ft deep blanket resists me. I carefully gloss you with the whole 5 gallons; my anxious grin hides the indigo beneath my eyelids. I wait for a brief moment just in case you wish for any last words, just in case you wish to come alive, just in case you wanted to dance and sing. Then as the match ignites your body I laugh and welcome the hea

Stormy Tears by loudwisdom, literature

Melted Stars by loudwisdom, literature

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Melted Stars

Melted Stars Shaved memories tailored to biased remark A grown man weeps in an endless park His tower collapses as his fear creeps Broken history reaps Misbehaved when ethics were weak Fallen oaks and melted stars leak Collecting within the memories of young The youth becoming the old's new lung Storing and repeating for a century more Crossing over seas onto distant shore Passed along an image is kept Of a young man now past, of how he leapt Leapt for equality, security and for a future's seed Now grown into a powerful Oak which will lead The next generation of old men as they weep The glorification of their names will reap

A dream by loudwisdom, literature

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A dream

A Dream When cooties were everywhere That’s the last dream I had All the blooming ones were trampled by other’s logic Peroxide on all hope Thinking it was liberty to not be attached to a desire Turning each day into a gargoyle Then I met you Words appeared; each letter entered, a flamingo smile on my face Our games of truth or dare went into extra innings Letting my shadows and past actions crash to the floor Returning each piece of information back to me with untold love Dancing around a camp fire with you is so much fun at night The glow of the internet monitor pales in comparison To our glowing faces and warming

Playground Maybes by loudwisdom, literature

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Playground Maybes

Playground Maybes Yellow plastic and rusty chains Gives birth to a new dynamic Fostered by awkward and blushing faces Games of truth or dare, dancing around the big issues Wanting so badly to build us a hideaway Sanding the step ladder to our tree top escape Never wanting to fly away like our beaked neighbors Swinging slowly, our arms holding each other’s chains Swaying in the pool of dreams we are creating Our words moving as a Frisbee, as time slows like syrup We sit and plan; on our garbage cans Desiring so badly to snuggle against the pine needles To build our tree abode This proves difficult though For these bluepri

Lighthouse by loudwisdom, literature

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Lighthouse

Lighthouse Let me be your guide off the treacherous seas You shouldn’t hide; I’m not a simple tease Won’t point you into sharpened shoals You and me I need no other goals Follow my light please and I will keep you whole Not a murderer of emotion Never been a mirage in the distance Let my cathode rays illuminate your hearts vessel Let me take you home, snuggle amongst the trees I was once frozen, but your laugh made me static Towering and pumping me full of this warm light Now it’s time, for it to all go back to you I won’t wander away in searched frenzy Let me be your beacon of hope I’m stable, row

Rant 2 by loudwisdom, literature

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Rant 2

Rant 2 Is this all there is to it? A compilation of losses and victories? Where young people’s dreams are cleaned and cut, never to order Are we all mildew just waiting to be wiped away? Is the god of life and loss the same? Are we all just born a bunch of orange peels? As significant as an already read fortune cookie When will we be done? Popping the bubble wrap that is earth I never want kids, never want any record To remember me when I’m gone Life is becoming more and more like recycled toilet paper Thank god each blade of grass hasn’t a voice The agony of when we mow our pristine lawns Saosin had it right wh

First Haiku by loudwisdom, literature

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College Memoirs by loudwisdom, literature

HomeComing by loudwisdom, literature

6ft Flaming Snowcone by loudwisdom, literature

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6ft Flaming Snowcone

Stormy Tears by loudwisdom, literature

Melted Stars by loudwisdom, literature

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Melted Stars

Rebels Untitled by loudwisdom, literature

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Rebels Untitled

Rebels untitled Hiding in the shadows, warriors of the cloak and dagger Bearded faces amongst the sky Banded and united strong, on they march Their destinies and their homeland in the balance Overthrow the tyrants at the top of their throne Eradicate the injustices of the law Rowdy and fueled by their inner fire they march They go to change the system and to place benevolence above all else They reach their destination and now their eyes change Swords drawn they raid the houses and castle in search of their targets Each enters with a loud roar and each leaves with their swords crimson red Mothers, daughters, fathers, brothers, sis

Clown by loudwisdom, literature

Iron Pen by loudwisdom, literature

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Iron Pen

Iron Pen My quill is made of iron. My ink is made from my blood. With every etching I bleed, to let the pain flow out an away. Pain has enveloped and is stationed at the port of my heart. Sunshine can temporarily bring relief but, Night always comes. There is less blood within me than that etched on paper. The world can cut deep, and seems relentless I run on the hamster wheel of emotions. Will I ever escape? Only my final breath will bring the end. And on my tombstone my name will be etched, along with my words. “Here in eternal solitude sleeps a man whom will be forgotten”

Cycles and Truth by loudwisdom, literature

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Cycles and Truth

Cycles and truth The predictable sun rises in the east and sets in the west. Waves build upward until they finally collapse within themselves. The ball is tossed in the air and falls to the ground and then it rises again. People follow simplistic cycles just as the ones that are in nature. Happiness turns into sadness which revolves back again to happiness. Things get worse before they get better. People move forward to enjoy some fresh breathes of air until they once again are locked within. Themselves. Endless cycles can be seen to anyone who is willing to look. We put ourselves in them but does that mean we are wrong or right f

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Chianti and Cigarettes by adelechapline, literature

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Chianti and Cigarettes

I. We drank Chianti from porcelain mugs. Mine bore an Irish blessing--yours was decorated with a Chinese proverb that warned of things to come. We sat awkwardly by the window and I couldn't meet your eyes. I never could bear the judgment within them. You looked away from me then, perhaps realizing the futility in your attempts for normality, and I longed for a kind word, anything, but instead of begging, I watched the fire crackle in the hearth. It was all too late. II. The cigarette was burning down to the filter as I filled my lungs with the same blackness you roused in me. Your eyes stared blankly at th

Tsunami by warac67, literature

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Tsunami

A silent flood washes over the town And sweeps away the villagers without a sound Carries limp bodies with its crushing wave Giving them no warning to save Never able to say goodbye As the rain pours from the blackened sky With fat gray clouds that seem to cry Then they start to disappear And the black sky starts to clear The sun peeks out it's ugly head To count the number of the dead

Magic Girl by wh0rem0ans, literature

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Magic Girl

She spoke in movie lines and lyrics. She designed orange and pink clothes. She kept pet potatoes under her bed. She raced back to hug me over and over. She roller bladed off porch cliffs easily. She designed orange and pink clothes. She sank into a teen abyss so deep. She dressed in ugly emotions and pain. She wrote out her darkest poignancies. She abhorred touch and light and me. She offered her fiercest support to me. She lived in a world of her own design. She decided to be a raging success. She studied and passed the GED test. She learned to drive and practiced going. She got a job and found a friendly world. She made frie

Depression by warac67, literature

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Depression

My eyes tear and I don't know why My lip quivers as I start to cry The wall I built is caving in The demons and fears are starting to win I feel my body beginning to overflow With thoughts and feelings that I don't know Depression overtakes me like a tidal wave I can longer hide in a dry sheltering cave I am drenched in this sadness that I can't dry And the worst part is that I don't even know why

Hell by warac67, literature

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Excalibur by loudwisdom, literature

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Excalibur

Excalibur Forget the lies we have all been told The blade itself had no might In fact strength derived from the stone Gray, dull and with imperfections it sat We are all mislead, for the plainness ensured preservation. Waiting centuries, Excalibur knelt rigid on its stance Would only submit to the one’s hold Many attempted and all but one failed And that is where the story of the stone’s life ends Forgotten by almost all, an insignificant shadow Few realizing it was truly the Holy Grail.

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About loudwisdom

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July 28, 1990
United States
Deviant for 16 years
He / Him

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The Last Samurai

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Edison glass yellowcard john mayer bloc party

Favourite Games

pokemon, fable, ace combat

Favourite Gaming Platform

N64

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Persistance, gullabillity and deep thought

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philosophy, relationship dynamics

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loudwisdom

Mar 1, 2011

New Works

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Hello everyone, although i announced a month or two ago of my return i will now officially begin to submit new material, i have been taking many poetry classes so hopefully i have learned from my past errors and you will find my work of better quality. I hope all of you are doing well and thank you for your return wishes.

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loudwisdom

Apr 12, 2010

coming back

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Ive been away along time and i notice alot of changes. i hope everyone is well. i have been very busy this past year. Graduated high school and now am enrolled in a community college with my girlfriend of two years. Life has treated me well and i hope for the most part it has gone well for all of you. Looking forward to the future, glad to be back, also my gf is new to deviantart her name is warac67 check out her deviations. looking forward to all your posts